Muybridge Animation Feedback

I made a peer feedback form for my Eadweard Muybridge animation, so here are the results.

I’m happy that people liked the colour scheme, I tried to make everything nice to look at.

All of the feedback is pretty positive which is good!  However, the constructive feedback is also really helpful.

I agree that the screaming sound could have been better.  It’s true that it would have been way better if the horses had fallen over too, and I’m annoyed that I didn’t bother to do that.  I probably should have shown more of Muybridge’s life, but that would have been a different kind of animation – I wanted it to just be a snippet of his life that I could play around with.  I also agree that the ending shot was too short, I originally wanted to have a more drawn out shot with roses being thrown at Muybridge, but I ran out of time.

This is relieving because I wasn’t sure how well people would be able to understand the plot.

This is good, as my main focus whilst making it was for it to be entertaining.

I’m happy with this, I wanted all my characters to be cute and fun to look at.

I’m happy about this because I really tried to use squash and stretch wherever I could, to increase the motion of the movement, and to add a more comedic edge to everything, Especially the little boy in the carriage.

I’m really happy that people liked it 😀

Thanks, Dia.

Overall, pretty positive feedback for the music!  Yay!  I was unsure whether to add music or not, as I was worried that it would clash with the sound effects that I had grown fond of by that point, but when I found the vintage music, I was so happy with it.

Almost all of the feedback from this one was positive.  But I acknowledge the more constructive responses, as they make good points.